Saturday, September 7, 2013

Leading

Story I wrote for a Fiction Writing class in college.  I found it, and as usually happens with my writing, decided it wasn't as bad as I originally thought, therefore I'm sharing because I'm too tired to write anything else today.

She scratches her cheek and looks out the window, feeling the warm sunlight flood through the glass onto her face.  Closing her eyes, she leans back against the pillows on the couch and sighs heavily.  “Can we go for a walk now?  It’s so nice outside,” she pleads, the sound of a whine leaking into her voice.
He sighs heavily.  “I just want to see the end of this game,” he explains in a tone that communicates his patience is wearing thin.
“The score is fifty-six to twenty,” she says in the same tone.  “I think we can surmise-“
“Just let me finish it, all right?  There’s only a minute and a half left, it won’t-“
“A minute and a half in football usually ends up being more like-“
 “Will you-just -” he growls, patience finally wearing out.  The sound of a deep breath reaches her ears as he tries to control his temper.  “We’ll go for a walk; we’ll go for an hour and a half long jaunt if it makes you happy, just please, please, let me finish watching the game,” he begs, angling his body back toward the TV.
She snorts, feeling nettled, but relents and is quiet as the sound of the TV fills her ears.  “Seahawks run with the ball, they’re at the forty, now the fifty…”
She lays her head back and closes her eyes, feeling the cat crawl onto her lap and purr contentedly as she scratches behind his ears.  “You know, I’m not the only one who wants to go for a walk,” she adds as the announcer on the TV shouts the new score.  The losing team has made a touchdown, there is a time out happening.  The walk is moving further and further away.  “Stabler wants to go to.”
“Stabler always wants to go for a walk,” he says, not looking away from the TV.  “He’s a dog.  It’s engrained in their DNA to want to walk constantly.”
“Don’t you think it’s cruel to make him wait?  He’s been sitting by the back door for the last forty-five minutes,” she notes.
“Stabler!” he shouts, listening to the dogs nails scratch along the wood floor as he races into the living room.  She rolls her eyes; he begins to scratch the dog’s ears roughly and the dog wags his tail like it’s been years since he’s laid on eyes on him.  “Who’s a good boy?  You’re a good boy… being so patient, and tolerant of my needs and-“
“Oh please,” she groans.  “All he hears is blah, blah, blah-“
“And that’s all I hear from you,” he laughs, still scratching the dog’s ears.  “See!  Look, final score…fifty-six to twenty-eight.  Now… we can go for a walk.”  He stretches his long arms and legs, arching his back against the chair before standing up. 
She nods, feeling relieved that they are finally going to get out of the house as she stands up.  The cat jumps from her lap onto the floor, scampering off under the couch to her favorite napping place. 
She’s fluffing her hair and pulling on her shoes as the television suddenly roars loudly.  Static blares over the screen, relentlessly invading the ears of everyone within the small sitting area.  “Gaaah,” she cries, clapping her hands over her ears.  “What are you doing?  Turn it off!”
“I don’t have the remote,” he explains loudly, having to shout over the sound of the static.  “Molly must have stepped on it.”
“What do you mean Molly stepped on it?  She went under the couch, wasn’t it on your chair?”
“No, I haven’t had it-“
“What do you mean you haven’t had it?”
“I haven’t had it!  I laid it down earlier when I was sitting over there, but when I moved to the chair I didn’t take it with me.”
“Why not?”
“I didn’t need it; the game was on, I was going to watch it,” he explains, getting down on his knees and shoving his arm under the couch.  “I wasn’t planning on changing the channel.”
She groans.  “How many times do we need to go through this?  You have to keep track of it!   You have to put it someplace where we can-“
“Don’t lecture me, just… help me find it!”
“There’s no sense in us both floundering about looking for it, I’m going to try and turn the TV off,” she shouts, walking across the room and feeling along the edge of the set.
“You’re going to mess up all the settings!” he protests.
“No I’m not,” she explains as calmly as possible with the TV blaring over her voice.  “I just have to run my fingers along the edge until I find the button that shuts it off.”  She runs her fingers over the buttons, which are really just flat little symbols against the edge of the small TV.  She hits the wrong one.
“Tonight on Sixty Minutes,” an announcer screams, causing her to jump away from the TV and clap her hands back over her ears.
“Great!  You made it louder,” he shouts.
“At least it’s not the static,” she counters.
“Will you just help me look around for the remote?  You pushing buttons on the edge of that thing is not going to shut it off or turn it down,” he grumbles, still feeling around under the edge of the couch.
She groans and begins to shove her fingers between the cushions, searching for the thin piece of plastic that serves as their remote.  There’s a few moments of silence between them as the TV blares loudly.  “Listen, I understand how confusing this still is for you,” she says after a few moments.  “But-“
“I asked you not to lecture me.  I get it; you went through it as well and it takes getting used to,” he grumbles.  “I’m used to it now… I am.”
“It’s only been six months; you can’t get used to this type of life in six-“
“Well, I don’t exactly have a choice do I?” he shouts, getting to his feet and walking across the room.  The dog barks loudly as he runs into him; there’s a crash as he tumbles to the floor.
“Oh, God!  Are you all right?” she shouts, cautiously crossing the room until she finds where he fell.
“Yeah… yeah, I’m all right,” he groans.
“Are you sure?”
“I’m fine… stop trying to coddle me.”
“I’m not trying to coddle you, I’m -“
“I’m used to it!  I am… just… stupid dog...  Stabler!” he shouts, angry that he has to rely on him for assistance
The dog pads over quietly, nuzzling his hands with its cold nose.  He finds the dogs collar and holds on, crawling first to his knees and then onto his feet.  The dog moves and he follows its lead across the room back to the chair.  “The TV is still blaring.”
“I’m aware...  Sit, let me look for the remote,” she sighs, crawling onto her knees and feeling along the floor under the couch.
“How long did it take you?” he asks after a few moments, trying not to shout but finding he has to over the sound of the commercial blaring in the background.  “Nationwide is on your side!”
“How long did it take me to what?”
“To get used to it.”
“I’m still getting used to it,” she explains.  The cat hisses as her fingers accidently bump its face.  “Oh, Molly… keep your claws in…”
“’You’re still getting used to it,’” he repeats.  “What is that supposed to mean?”
“It means that I’m still getting used to it.  It’s just like anything else in life, there’s constant change and new things to come across; as long as that goes on, ‘getting used to it’ is a state of being, not a phase.”
He nods, ruffling his hair and randomly thinking he needs a haircut as a commercial for the service rings in his ears.  “Any luck?”
“Obviously not.  The TV is still blaring.  Did you put it on the entertainment center?”
“No!” he protests.  “I swear… I was sitting over there, and then when you came in I moved 'cause I know you like to stretch out and… wha… wait,” he starts, shifting in the chair and digging in the cushions.
She waits; suddenly the volume of the TV lowers and then finally shuts off.  “It was in the chair… in the chair… the whole time?”
“No,” he replies, the sound of laughter leaking into his voice.  “It was in my pocket.”
She shakes her head, snickering as he gets to his feet and walks toward the door.  It opens and Stabler leads the pair of them outside.  The sun is warm, much warmer now that they are out in it than it was through the window.
“Okay, let’s do this,” he says confidently.
“Let me take Stabler,” she says.
“Why?”
“Because, you’re still working on using the cane,” she explains, handing him the long walking stick.
“But… If we have him, I don’t need to-“

“Yes,” she replies, pulling her glasses over her eyes even though it’s unnecessary to block the sun.  “Yes, you do.”

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